homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a bad news.
I couldn't buy fishes.
Because the fishes shocked because of hunger.
Lastly, they died one by one.
Now, there is no fishes in aquarium.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
What? You mean, there are no fishes in your aquarium?
I\'m sorry to hear about that. As you mentioned on your speech, pray for them.
Don\'t worry I am sure that you will have a lot of fishes these coming days.
Cheer up, Tom! Let us talk more about this later in class.
Teacher Nina
I have a bad news.
>> Correct!I couldn\'t buy fishes.
>> I wasn\'t able to buy fishes. Because the fishes shocked because of hunger.
>> Did you mean: Because the fishes died of hunger. Lastly, they died one by one.
>> Correct!Now, there is no fishes in aquarium.
>> Now, there are no in the aquarium.
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