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I prefer an apartment. because when I have to move, I can buy it early. so if my apartment is very old, I can sell it faster than house. and I feel security from thief because guards are protecting my apartment. and the apartment has playgrounds so my son's can use it everyday.

Hello there! Thank you for expressing your ideas about it. Please check the corrections I made. And ms. [이름], don\'t forget to start your sentences with capital letter okay? Have a great day! ~T. Jessie~ I prefer an apartment. >> Correct! OR>> I prefer an apartment because when I have to move, I can readily buy it.because when I have to move, I can buy it early. >> Because when I have to move, I can readily buy it. OR>> I prefer an apartment because when I have to move, I can readily buy it.so if my apartment is very old, I can sell it faster than house. >> So if my apartment is very old, I can sell it faster than a house. and I feel security from thief because guards are protecting my apartment. >> And I can feel safe from thives because the security guards are protecting my apartment. and the apartment has playgrounds so my son\'s can use it everyday. >> The apartment also has playgrounds where my son can play everyday.