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2014-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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field, choosed, ran, grew, saw, wrote, spoke, dranged, drove, took, ring We watched a movie at school all day. The tittled of this movie was "jurassic park" The movie is from company named Universal It is my favorite movie.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom! Wow! really? I love that movie too! I can still remember when you mentioned that you like dinosaurs during our first day of class. It is really nice to know a lot of things about them. Do you think there will be dinosaurs in the future? Let us talk more about this topic and your homework in class. Thank you so much for your effort and time. Keep it up!Teacher Nina   field, choosed, ran, grew, saw, wrote, spoke, dranged, drove, took, ring>> flew, chose, run, grown, hadn\'t seen, written, spoken, Correct!, Correct!, Correct!, rang We watched a movie at school all day. >> Correct!The tittled of this movie was \"jurassic park\" >> The title of the movie was \"Jurrasic Park\".The movie is from company named Universal >> Correct!>> OR: The movie was made by a company named Universal. It is my favorite movie. >> Correct!

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