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Composition making! What human right is the most important? Uhm…I think it’s very a difficult and hard question. But, I also think it’s an interesting question. Though there are lots of human rights, I think the most important human rights are the right of freedom, equal right. There are basically 2 reasons. 1. Historical reason Actually, most of humans had no freedom in the past. At that age, only a few humans such as king, royal family, peerage had freedom and they had dominated most of humans until it was collapsed by revolutions. By revolutions, those rights were deemed very important things and as a result of that we can have those rights now. 2. Constitutional reason By those revolutions, most of humans thought the right of freedom, equal right were basic right to human beings. And they thought it was needed a method (something not to infringe those rights again) So, they regulated those rights in constitution and deemed them as natural human rights.

Hi there Sir [이름]!   A very great day to you! Thank you for sharing your opinion about the subject. You thought that it was a difficult question but you were able to give me a definitely good answer. Well, thanks to the first ones who constituted these human rights. Good job Sir!   See you in class!   ~Teacher Shanee   Composition making!What human right is the most important?Uhm…I think it’s very a difficult and hard question. >>Uhm...I think it a very difficult/hard question.But, I also think it’s an interesting question.>>But I also think that it\'s an interesting one.Though there are lots of human rights, >>Correct!I think the most important human rights are the right of freedom, equal right. >>I think the most improtant rights are the right to freedom and right to equality.There are basically 2 reasons. >>Correct!1. Historical reasonActually, most of humans had no freedom in the past. >>Correct!At that age, only a few humans such as king, royal family, peerage had freedom and they had dominated most of humans until it was collapsed by revolutions. >>At that age, only few humans such as kings, royal family membesr, and peerage had freedom and they had dominated most humans until it was destroyed by revolutions. By revolutions, those rights were deemed very important things and as a result of that we can have those rights now. >>Correct!2. Constitutional reasonBy those revolutions, most of humans thought the right of freedom, equal right were basic right to human beings. >>Throught those revolutions, most humans thought that the right to freedom and right to equality are the basic human rights. And they thought it was needed a method (something not to infringe those rights again) >>And they thought that it was really needed to have a method so that these rights will not be infringed. So, they regulated those rights in constitution and deemed them as natural human rights. >>Correct!