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2014-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Winnie

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Hi, teacher Winnie. I did the homework for May 19. i will do passed homework next.T.T I bring my memory disk and the book when i go to work. I will do loss my weight 7kg during 5 month. It is possible to swim hard and to eat a little. My friend speak the Korean weak slang, sometimes. But her boyfriend said that "Don't speak slang with your pretty mouth". I does want to hit him really. I have the silver ring and gold ring. The gold ring is couple's ring on the ring finger of my left hand. But the silver ring is just ring on the little finger of my right hand. I really want to hear that "You look slim".

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for spending some time to do your homework. Great job! ~Teacher Winnie~ I did the homework for May 19. i will do passed homework next.T.T>> I did my homework for May 19. I will pass my homework next time.I bring my memory disk and the book when i go to work.>> I bring my memory disk and my book when ever I go to work.I will do loss my weight 7kg during 5 month. It is possible to swim hard and to eat a little. >> I will loss weight for 7 kg in 5 months. It would be possible if I will swim more and eat a little.My friend speak the Korean weak slang, sometimes. >>My friend sometimes speak the Korean weak slang. But her boyfriend said that \"Don\'t speak slang with your pretty mouth\". >> But her boyfriend told her not to speak slang with her pretty mouth. I does want to hit him really.>> I really wanted to hit him.I have the silver ring and gold ring. >> I have a silver and gold ring. The gold ring is couple\'s ring on the ring finger of my left hand. >> The gold ring is a couple\'s ring and the other ring is on my left hand. But the silver ring is just ring on the little finger of my right hand.>> But the silver is just for my little finger on my right hand.I really want to hear that \"You look slim\". >> I really want to hear from other people that I look slim.

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