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If you see someone with a lot of tattoos what do you think of them?
I heard that gansters have tatoos long time ago. It looks scary. Especially, men can see a lot of tattoss in the public bathroom in Korea. Usually, the tattos' picture is dragan, eagle, letter and so on. It is said that almost is big and black. The men who get tattoos look awfully. Tattoo's image is not good. However, I know that the trend have changed. As popular celebrities got tattoo, people have interest in it. Women get tattoos such as rose, initial and it is very small. Finally, it looks nice and hot. However, it is said that the pain is serious when they get it. Some people are addicted it so they get tattoos regularly. I don't want to tattoo. Although it is very beautiful and luxury, I don't like it. My friends got a tattoo on eyebrow. It is for beauty. It is Okay but if I see someone wiht a lot of tattoos, I will be misunderstand them who is bad or strange person. Thank you. It's sunny and cool today.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [Name]!
When a person has a tattoo, it seems that he/she is a criminal or something.
We cannot really avoid that kind of stereotyping.
I actually want to have a tattoo. Seriously.
Anyway, if I will have the courage someday, I would have one. kkk
See you again tomorrow!
Have a good day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you see someone with a lot of tattoos what do you think of them?
I heard that gansters have tatoos long time ago.
>> I heard that gangsters have tattoos long time ago.
It looks scary.
>> correct!
Especially, men can see a lot of tattoss in the public bathroom in Korea.
>> Especially, men can see a lot of tattoos in the public bathroom in Korea.
Usually, the tattos\' picture is dragan, eagle, letter and so on.
>> Usually, the tattoos\' picture are dragon, eagle, letters and so on.
It is said that almost is big and black.
>> They say that is is almost big and black.
The men who get tattoos look awfully.
>> men who got tattoos look awful.
Tattoo\'s image is not good.
>> correct!
However, I know that the trend have changed.
>> correct!
As popular celebrities got tattoo, people have interest in it.
>> correct!
Women get tattoos such as rose, initial and it is very small.
>> Women get tattoos such as rose, initials and it is very small.
Finally, it looks nice and hot.
>> correct!
However, it is said that the pain is serious when they get it.
>> correct!
>> or: However, it is said that it is seriously painful when they have it.
Some people are addicted it so they get tattoos regularly.
>> Some people are addicted to it so they get tattoos regularly.
I don\'t want to tattoo.
>> I don\'t want to have a tattoo.
Although it is very beautiful and luxury, I don\'t like it.
>> Although it is very beautiful and luxurious, I don\'t like it.
My friends got a tattoo on eyebrow.
>> My friends got a tattoo on her eyebrow.
It is for beauty.
>> It is for her to be beautiful.
It is Okay but if I see someone wiht a lot of tattoos, I will be misunderstand them who is bad or strange person.
>> It is okay but if I see someone with a lot of tattoos, I will misinterpret them as a bad or strange person.
Thank you. It\'s sunny and cool today.
>> correct!
When a person has a tattoo, it seems that he/she is a criminal or something.
We cannot really avoid that kind of stereotyping.
I actually want to have a tattoo. Seriously.
Anyway, if I will have the courage someday, I would have one. kkk
See you again tomorrow!
Have a good day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you see someone with a lot of tattoos what do you think of them?
I heard that gansters have tatoos long time ago.
>> I heard that gangsters have tattoos long time ago.
It looks scary.
>> correct!
Especially, men can see a lot of tattoss in the public bathroom in Korea.
>> Especially, men can see a lot of tattoos in the public bathroom in Korea.
Usually, the tattos\' picture is dragan, eagle, letter and so on.
>> Usually, the tattoos\' picture are dragon, eagle, letters and so on.
It is said that almost is big and black.
>> They say that is is almost big and black.
The men who get tattoos look awfully.
>> men who got tattoos look awful.
Tattoo\'s image is not good.
>> correct!
However, I know that the trend have changed.
>> correct!
As popular celebrities got tattoo, people have interest in it.
>> correct!
Women get tattoos such as rose, initial and it is very small.
>> Women get tattoos such as rose, initials and it is very small.
Finally, it looks nice and hot.
>> correct!
However, it is said that the pain is serious when they get it.
>> correct!
>> or: However, it is said that it is seriously painful when they have it.
Some people are addicted it so they get tattoos regularly.
>> Some people are addicted to it so they get tattoos regularly.
I don\'t want to tattoo.
>> I don\'t want to have a tattoo.
Although it is very beautiful and luxury, I don\'t like it.
>> Although it is very beautiful and luxurious, I don\'t like it.
My friends got a tattoo on eyebrow.
>> My friends got a tattoo on her eyebrow.
It is for beauty.
>> It is for her to be beautiful.
It is Okay but if I see someone wiht a lot of tattoos, I will be misunderstand them who is bad or strange person.
>> It is okay but if I see someone with a lot of tattoos, I will misinterpret them as a bad or strange person.
Thank you. It\'s sunny and cool today.
>> correct!
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