homework
학생이 쓴 원문
lied, sit, shoke, rised, threw, said, ran
New living things lives in my fish tank.
Corals, Sea grass, Clam and a lot more.
As time goes by, my fish thank's living things become healthy.
강사 첨삭
Tom!
It\'s a happy Wednesday!
Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing about your new pets.^^
I know that your fish tank looks great!
You did pretty well with your grammar homework.
Please go over the corrections.
Don\'t forget the correct tenses of verbs.
Don\'t worry, let us discuss the answers in class.
See you! If you have any questions, comments or suggestions just tell me in class.
Teacher Nina
lied, sit, shoke, rised, threw, said, ran>> lay, sat, shook, rose, Correct! , Correct! , Correct!
New living things lives in my fish tank.
>> New living things live in my fish tank.Corals, Sea grass, Clam and a lot more.
>> Correct!
>> OR: There are corals, sea grasses, clams and a lot more/ As time goes by, my fish thank\'s living things become healthy.
>> As time goes by, the living things in my fish tank are becoming healthier.
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