Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. It's my birthday today! - Congratulations .
2. What time will you be back home? - Around twelve.
3. Are you hungry? - Just a bit.
4. Do you like school? -Not much.
5. Is this the first time you have been to Britain? - Yes, it is.
6. Is the weather like this in your country? - More or less.
7. How often do you see your parents? - When I do.
8. We're going to the disco. - Have fun .
9. The phone's ringing - I'll get it .
10. See you tomorrow. - Yes, see you.
Number 7 is not easy for me. I think 'When I am at leisure' is good.
My brother is first son in my family. First son is important yet in Korea. I think that I will meet a lot of family mebers and close relatives at the wedding. I am going to wear Hanbok that is traditional clothes in Korea. The color is fancy. My Hanbok is made up a shrimp pink skirt and a white jeogori that is top. I will go to hair salon. There was wedding every saturday in may so my husband looks tired. However this is last so I'd like to have a good time.:)
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
I am very sure that you will meet a lot fo relatives this coming Saturday so you really need to look good. kkk
have your beauty rest tomorrow and congratulations to your brother.
Enjoy your weekend and have fun!
See you then next week.
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
1. It\'s my birthday today! - Congratulations .
>> correct!
2. What time will you be back home? - Around twelve.
>> correct!
3. Are you hungry? - Just a bit.
>> correct!
4. Do you like school? -Not much.
>> correct!
5. Is this the first time you have been to Britain? - Yes, it is.
>> correct!
6. Is the weather like this in your country? - More or less.
>> correct!
7. How often do you see your parents? - When I do.
>> D can
8. We\'re going to the disco. - Have fun .
>> correct!
9. The phone\'s ringing - I\'ll get it .
>> correct!
10. See you tomorrow. - Yes, see you.
>> correct!
Number 7 is not easy for me.
>> correct!
I think \'When I am at leisure\' is good.
>> correct!
My brother is first son in my family.
>> My brother is the first son in the family.
First son is important yet in Korea.
>> being the first son is important in Korea.
I think that I will meet a lot of family mebers and close relatives at the wedding.
>> correct! (members)
I am going to wear Hanbok that is traditional clothes in Korea.
>> I am going to wear a Hanbok which is the traditional clothes in Korea.
The color is fancy.
>> correct!
My Hanbok is made up a shrimp pink skirt and a white jeogori that is top.
>> My Hanbok is made up of a shrimp pink skirt and a white jeogori on top.
I will go to hair salon.
>> I will go to the hair salon.
There was wedding every saturday in may so my husband looks tired.
>> There is a wedding every Saturday this month of may so my husband looks tired.
However this is last so I\'d like to have a good time.:)
>> correct!
I am very sure that you will meet a lot fo relatives this coming Saturday so you really need to look good. kkk
have your beauty rest tomorrow and congratulations to your brother.
Enjoy your weekend and have fun!
See you then next week.
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
1. It\'s my birthday today! - Congratulations .
>> correct!
2. What time will you be back home? - Around twelve.
>> correct!
3. Are you hungry? - Just a bit.
>> correct!
4. Do you like school? -Not much.
>> correct!
5. Is this the first time you have been to Britain? - Yes, it is.
>> correct!
6. Is the weather like this in your country? - More or less.
>> correct!
7. How often do you see your parents? - When I do.
>> D can
8. We\'re going to the disco. - Have fun .
>> correct!
9. The phone\'s ringing - I\'ll get it .
>> correct!
10. See you tomorrow. - Yes, see you.
>> correct!
Number 7 is not easy for me.
>> correct!
I think \'When I am at leisure\' is good.
>> correct!
My brother is first son in my family.
>> My brother is the first son in the family.
First son is important yet in Korea.
>> being the first son is important in Korea.
I think that I will meet a lot of family mebers and close relatives at the wedding.
>> correct! (members)
I am going to wear Hanbok that is traditional clothes in Korea.
>> I am going to wear a Hanbok which is the traditional clothes in Korea.
The color is fancy.
>> correct!
My Hanbok is made up a shrimp pink skirt and a white jeogori that is top.
>> My Hanbok is made up of a shrimp pink skirt and a white jeogori on top.
I will go to hair salon.
>> I will go to the hair salon.
There was wedding every saturday in may so my husband looks tired.
>> There is a wedding every Saturday this month of may so my husband looks tired.
However this is last so I\'d like to have a good time.:)
>> correct!
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