Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Thursday!
I hope I am really helping.
Do you feel that I make it difficult for you to study English?
I want you to be frank.
Thanks you! ^^
In addition, avoid thinking negatively about studying English.
Try to relax and enjoy while having our classes and reviewing after our lessons.
By the way, online shopping is indeed useful, but there are a lot of disadvantages of it.
One of them is the appearance of the goods.
It is possible that the look of a product is different on the web from the actual look of it.
What do you think?
Anyway, have a great night!
See you!
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Hi Paula!
Happy Tursday!
>> Happy Thursday!
I alway thank you for your advise after our class.
>> I am always thankful for your advice after our classes.
I think the more I learn English, the more I feel hard to study.
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, Have a good day! today also.
>> Anyway, have a good day today also.
*ESSAY: How often do you go shopping? What do you usually buy?
Actually I don\'t like to go shopping.
>> Actually, I don\'t like to go shopping.
I don\'t have enough room to enjoy shopping economically.
>> CORRECT!
I was born in a poor home, and I\'m used to live carefully.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I was born in a poor home, and I\'m used to live practically.
I\'m sorry to say poor looking.
>> CORRECT!
But I use the internet shopping when I need to buy something.
>> However, I use online shopping when I need to buy something.
We, korea, have a good system by on line to buy goods.
>> We, Koreans, have a good system by online to buy goods.
Of course, some items are exception, electric, clothing..
>> Of course, some items are exceptions such as electricity, clothing and so on.
The company which have shopping system on line have also their warehouses off line, sales marketing on web.
>> The company which have shopping system online also have their warehouses offline sales marketing on the web.
To use this is very useful way to shopping in korea.
>> To use this is very useful way to shop in our country.
>> OR: Using this is a very convenient way to shop in our country.
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