Homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow! Today's topic is quite difficult to write. I can't come up with any example of it but it is certain that the topic is saying that there are no perfect people. I really agree to this opinion. We live in the world where every person is different to others and could never be perfect alone. However, perfection could be achieved when people work together filling each other's lack.
But working with others is not as easy as it is said. Today I had to present about the book ' A room with a view' and it was a group work. Because we also had to make a handout, I asked other members to send me data they took part yesterday. But I couldn't get in touch with one of two. So I asked the other to call her because they are friends and it was 12:38. However I couldn't contact even with her. I found that they fell asleep later. I hate to admit it but whenever I have group-works, there are always problems that makes me angry. Have you also met the people who make you angry when you do a group work?
강사 첨삭
Hello! I am so glad you found it challenging~
Happy Friday to you and please enjoy watching X-Men *_*
I have also met people who irritated me because of their personality probems.
Rather than bashing them secretly, I tend to talk to them and tell them their mistakes^^
Take a look at this, [이름]:
When you AGREE WITH someone/something, it means you accept the point of someone/something.
-I agree with you.
-Matt does not agree with my answer.
You AGREE ON some issue or point of debate.
-We agreed on this issue.
You AGREE TO demands/queries, or you agree to do something.
-He agreed to my demands.
-He agreed to join me for the movie.
Wow! Today\'s topic is quite difficult to write.
>>Wow! Today\'s topic is quite difficult to write about.
I can\'t come up with any example of it but it is certain that the topic is saying that there are no perfect people.
>>I can\'t come up with any example but it is certain that the topic is saying that there are no perfect people.
I really agree to this opinion.
>> I really agree on this opinion.
We live in the world where every person is different to others and could never be perfect alone.
>>We live in the world where every person is different from others and could never be perfect.
However, perfection could be achieved when people work together filling each other\'s lack.
>>However, perfection could be achieved when people work together filling what another lacks.
>>However, perfection could be achieved through complementing one another.But working with others is not as easy as it is said.
>>CORRECT!
Today I had to present about the book \' A room with a view\' and it was a group work.
>>Today, I had to present about the book, \' A Room With a View\' and it was a group work.
Because we also had to make a handout, I asked other members to send me data they took part yesterday.
>>Because we also had to make a handout, I asked other members to send me the data divided among themselves yesterday.
But I couldn\'t get in touch with one of two.
>>Unfortunately, I couldn\'t get in touch with one of them.
So I asked the other to call her because they are friends and it was 12:38.
>>So I asked the other to call her because they are friends and it was 12:38 AM/ PM.
However I couldn\'t contact even with her.
>>One thing more, I could not also contact her.
I found that they fell asleep later.
>>Later, I found out they fell asleep.
I hate to admit it but whenever I have group-works, there are always problems that makes me angry.
>>I have to admit it but whenever I work in a group, problems which make me angry always arise.
Have you also met the people who make you angry when you do a group work?
>>Have you also met people who make you angry when you do a group work?
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