Homework :)
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I think there are advantages and disadvantages in both cases.
If you lease a car, the thought that the car doesn't belong to you makes you to be careful. So you might have less accidents than others. Also, when you lease a car, you can cut costs in buying a car. That can save you a lot of money. And you can ride the latest car every time. You would never feel depressed because your car is older than others.
However there may be some restrictions when you lease a car. And those restrictions could be irritating. And the fact that the car doesn't belong to you, on the other way, could make you feel stressed.
It's true that everyone wants to have more than they have now. And if you own your own car, you could make the car as you like. You can change its design or set a better engine.
I did write some pro and cons of both case but I can't make up my mind on which decision is better.
Actually I am someone who doesn't know how to drive.
Maybe I might decide which is good when I could drive.
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Hello there, [이름]!
I just thought of that topic because cars are really essential.
Of course, finances, too^^
Budget is a necessary thing to consider T^T
Too bad that if we don\'t have enough, a little compromise will help~
I think there are advantages and disadvantages in both cases.
>>CORRECT!If you lease a car, the thought that the car doesn\'t belong to you makes you to be careful.
>>CORRECT!
So you might have less accidents than others.
>>So you might have less accidents.
Also, when you lease a car, you can cut costs in buying a car.
>>Also, when you lease a car, you can cut costs in buying a new one.
That can save you a lot of money.
>>CORRECT!
And you can ride the latest car every time.
>>And you can ride the latest car model every time.
You would never feel depressed because your car is older than others.
>>You would never feel depressed thinking that your car is older than others.
However there may be some restrictions when you lease a car.
>>However there may be some restrictions when you lease.
And those restrictions could be irritating.
>>CORRECT!
And the fact that the car doesn\'t belong to you, on the other way, could make you feel stressed.
>>The fact that the car doesn\'t belong to you, on the other way, could make you feel stressed.
It\'s true that everyone wants to have more than they have now.
>>CORRECT!
And if you own your own car, you could make the car as you like.
>>And if you own your car, you could do anything it as you please.
You can change its design or set a better engine.>>CORRECT!I did write some pro and cons of both case but I can\'t make up my mind on which decision is better.
>>I did write some pros and cons of the teo cases but I can\'t make up my mind on which is better.Actually I am someone who doesn\'t know how to drive.
>>CORRECT!Maybe I might decide which is good when I could drive.
>>I might decide which is better when I can finally drive.
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