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2014-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I got a phone call from my younger brother in the Hawaii for honeymoon. I was really glad. My phone is smart phone so we can use it for free when we call. I delivered the news to my parents. They understood this situation. They also send their pictures. They look happy and the scene looks nice. I'd like to go honeymoon again. kkk 1. LOSES FACE (c) loses respect 2. LOST HER NERVE (c) became scared 3. LOSING GROUND (c) losing its votes 4. LOSING HER TOUCH (d) losing her friends 5. LOSING OUT (a) at a deficit 6. LOST ON HIM (d) without impression 7. LOSING HER GRIP (c) losing her control 8. LOST HIS COOL (a) become angry

강사 첨삭

Hello again Ms. [Name]!
I am happy to hear that your brother is enjoying his honeymoon.
And you can always go to a honeymoon if you want too.
You are your husband need a break I think.
I hope that you can go out for a vacation the soonest.
See you again tomorrow!
Thanks for today!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


I got a phone call from my younger brother in the Hawaii for honeymoon.
>> 
I got a phone call from my younger brother who is in Hawaii for his honeymoon.
I was really glad.

>>  correct!
My phone is smart phone so we can use it for free when we call.

>>  My phone is  a smart phone so we can use it for free whenever we have to call.
I delivered the news to my parents.

>>  correct!
They understood this situation.

>>  correct! 
They also send their pictures.

>>  correct! 
They look happy and the scene looks nice.

>>  correct! 
 I\'d like to go honeymoon again. kkk

>> I\'d like to go to a honeymoon again. kkk
1. LOSES FACE (c) loses respect

>> correct! 
2. LOST HER NERVE (c) became scared

>>  correct! 
3. LOSING GROUND (c) losing its votes

>>  (d) losing its advantage
4. LOSING HER TOUCH (d) losing her friends

>>  (a) losing her skill
5. LOSING OUT (a) at a deficit

>>  (b) at a disadvantage
6. LOST ON HIM (d) without impression

>>  (a) without effect
7. LOSING HER GRIP (c) losing her control

>>  correct!   
8. LOST HIS COOL (a) become angry

>> 
correct! 

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