homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I always say, "I love you! happy Birthday~"
And then my mother feels very happy.
Last birthday, I made paper flowers and gave her.
강사 첨삭
Tom ^-^
It\'s a fun and warm Tuesday afternoon.
How was your day? I hope that you had a marvelous time.
Thank you for doing your essay.
You are so sweet! I am sure that your mother really felt happy last Thursday.
We should always show our parents how much we love them.
See you in class. Take Care!
Teacher Nina
I always say, \"I love you! happy Birthday~\"
>> I always say \"I love you and Happy Birthday\".
>> OR: I always greet her and say \"I love you\".
And then my mother feels very happy.
>> Correct!
Last birthday, I made paper flowers and gave her.
>> I made paper flowers and gave it to her on her birthday.
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