Homework.

2014-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Chelsea. I passed a report that i did translation to my boss. so I'm very satisfied now . kkk :) Anyway today's topic is "What is your opinion about actors or actresses who run for a position in politics?" Even if who would being a actress or actresses, I think everyone can run for a position in politics. At least i know a person who being a actor once, doing well in currently governer position. He is "Arnold Schwarzenegger". Although he had a scandal. ;;; I think In a free democracy, maybe all the action(such as run in politics) is free? Bye. good night Chelsea.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Luke^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. I agree with you, I think everyone has the right to run for a position in politics but I still think they should be knowledgeable. Anyway, see you tomorrow^^ Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea. >> CORRECT^^I passed a report that i did translation to my boss.>> I passed  my tranlation report to my boss.so I\'m very satisfied now . kkk :)>> So, I\'m very satisfied now. Kkk :)Anyway today\'s topic is \"What is your opinion about actors or actresses who run for a position in politics?\">> CORRECT^^Even if who would being a actress or actresses, I think everyone can run for a position in politics.>> Even if you\'re an actress, I think everyone can run for a position in politics.At least i know a person who being a actor once, doing well in currently governer position. He is \"Arnold Schwarzenegger\".>> At least, I know someone who is an actor and he is currently a governow. He is Arnol Schwarzenegger.Although he had a scandal. ;;;>> CORRECT^^I think In a free democracy, maybe all the action(such as run in politics) is free?>> I think, in democracy, maybe all actions such as running for a position in politics are free.Bye. good night Chelsea. >> correct^^

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·