Homework.

2014-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Wow. I received all 5 point that you made a rate. I'm sentimental about this rate. kkk Anyway this part's topic is "If you were an English teacher, what would you do to improve your students' English?" If I was an English teacher, I absolutely try to give a translation report to students. I think doing a translation work is very useful for improving English skills. Although this translation is very hard work, students receive much increased English skills. It's very sleepy evening. I will go to bed earlier than usual. Bye. See you tomorrow.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections. I\'ll see you later^^ Rise and Shine^^ ~T.Chelsea Wow. I received all 5 point that you made a rate.>> Wow. I recieved 5 points from you.I\'m sentimental about this rate. kkk >> CORRECT^^Anyway this part\'s topic is \"If you were an English teacher, what would you do to improve your students\' English?\">> Anyway, this topic is \"If you were an English teacher, what would you do to improve your students\' English?\"If I was an English teacher, I absolutely try to give a translation report to students. >> If I was an English teacher, I would absolutely give the students a translation report.I think doing a translation work is very useful for improving English skills.>> I think doing a translation report is very useful to improve the students\' English skills.Although this translation is very hard work, students receive much increased English skills.>> Although translating is very difficult, students will improve their English skills.It\'s very sleepy evening. >> It\'s a very sleepy evening. I will go to bed earlier than usual. >> CORRECT^^Bye. See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT^^

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