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Is it possible to be rich, even if you do not have lots of money?
Unless I have lots of money, it is impossible to be rich. However, it is answer of young student. Actually, we said that rich have a lot of money. Is the standard amount of money to be rich? I want to say no. Although I don't have enough money, I can be a rich. First of all, I have to content my life and I need to feel happiness. You obstinately argue that I can be rich as I have a lot of money. I'd like to give up to be rich. In my case, my salary is fixed and I don't have rich father and husband. If I buy some ground, it will be selled with high price and then I will be rich. If I win the first prize at lotto, I will be rich. I will quit my work and then I will travel around the world with my family. Is it possible? I think it is difficult. Therefore, I will save money for travel. I can live like rich, even if I'm not rich. Finally, it is possible to be rich without lots of money. Thank you. See you tomorrow.
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Hi there Ms. [Name]
It is good to hear that you are doing good today.
Anyway, thanks for spending your time in doing your composition.
Well, I agree with what you have said but there are also some cases where a person can be rich even he does not have money.
There are stories about people who became rich from being poor or from rags to riches stories like that.
And the main ingredient there is being a hard-working person and disciplined.
And there are also some areas where we can still be rich even if we do not have money.
We can be rich with love from family and friends.
We can be rich with a lot of information we have learned.
We can be rich with happiness and good memories.
Anyway, see you again next time Ms. [Name]
Thanks for today!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Is it possible to be rich, even if you do not have lots of money?
Unless I have lots of money, it is impossible to be rich.
>> correct!
However, it is answer of young student.
>> However, it is the answer of young students.
Actually, we said that rich have a lot of money.
>> Actually, we said that rich people have a lot of money.
Is the standard amount of money to be rich?
>> Is money the standard of being rich?
I want to say no.
>> correct!
Although I don\'t have enough money, I can be a rich.
>> correct!
First of all, I have to content my life and I need to feel happiness.
>> First of all, I have to be contented wiht my life and I need to feel happy.
You obstinately argue that I can be rich as I have a lot of money.
>> correct!
I\'d like to give up to be rich.
>> I\'d like to give up being rich.
In my case, my salary is fixed and I don\'t have rich father and husband.
>> In my case, my salary is fixed and I don\'t have a rich father nor a rich husband.
If I buy some ground, it will be selled with high price and then I will be rich.
>> If I buy a lot, it will be sold in a high price and then I will be rich.
If I win the first prize at lotto, I will be rich.
>> if I wn the first prize in lotto, I will be rich.
I will quit my work and then I will travel around the world with my family.
>> correct!
Is it possible? I think it is difficult.
>> correct!
Therefore, I will save money for travel.
>> correct!
I can live like rich, even if I\'m not rich.
>> I can live like a rich person even if I\'m not rich.
Finally, it is possible to be rich without lots of money.
>> correct!
Thank you. See you tomorrow.
>> correct!
It is good to hear that you are doing good today.
Anyway, thanks for spending your time in doing your composition.
Well, I agree with what you have said but there are also some cases where a person can be rich even he does not have money.
There are stories about people who became rich from being poor or from rags to riches stories like that.
And the main ingredient there is being a hard-working person and disciplined.
And there are also some areas where we can still be rich even if we do not have money.
We can be rich with love from family and friends.
We can be rich with a lot of information we have learned.
We can be rich with happiness and good memories.
Anyway, see you again next time Ms. [Name]
Thanks for today!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Is it possible to be rich, even if you do not have lots of money?
Unless I have lots of money, it is impossible to be rich.
>> correct!
However, it is answer of young student.
>> However, it is the answer of young students.
Actually, we said that rich have a lot of money.
>> Actually, we said that rich people have a lot of money.
Is the standard amount of money to be rich?
>> Is money the standard of being rich?
I want to say no.
>> correct!
Although I don\'t have enough money, I can be a rich.
>> correct!
First of all, I have to content my life and I need to feel happiness.
>> First of all, I have to be contented wiht my life and I need to feel happy.
You obstinately argue that I can be rich as I have a lot of money.
>> correct!
I\'d like to give up to be rich.
>> I\'d like to give up being rich.
In my case, my salary is fixed and I don\'t have rich father and husband.
>> In my case, my salary is fixed and I don\'t have a rich father nor a rich husband.
If I buy some ground, it will be selled with high price and then I will be rich.
>> If I buy a lot, it will be sold in a high price and then I will be rich.
If I win the first prize at lotto, I will be rich.
>> if I wn the first prize in lotto, I will be rich.
I will quit my work and then I will travel around the world with my family.
>> correct!
Is it possible? I think it is difficult.
>> correct!
Therefore, I will save money for travel.
>> correct!
I can live like rich, even if I\'m not rich.
>> I can live like a rich person even if I\'m not rich.
Finally, it is possible to be rich without lots of money.
>> correct!
Thank you. See you tomorrow.
>> correct!
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