Homework.

2014-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. I attended a meeting in morning, so I had to postpone our class. Recently I need a recommendation of Marketing Director of our company for enter a graduate school that i want to in next year. So I will have to make a lunch time with My marketing director. I'm just nervous that send a invitation to the director. kkkk Anyway today's topic is "Should you tell the child that he or she was adopted? If so at what age? Or when? Why?" I'm trying to tell him or her the truth, when he or she completed to elementary school. Because I think It is good that to know the truth faster is. And I will give time of think about the truth to child. Anyway See you on Friday. Bye ~

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. Anyway, don\'t be nervous about snedin him an invitation. I know you can do it and I know that he will give you a recommendation^^ See you tomorrow^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^I attended a meeting in morning, so I had to postpone our class.>> I attended a meeting this morning, so I had to postpone our class.Recently I need a recommendation of Marketing Director of our company for enter a graduate school that i want to in next year.>> I need a recommendation from the Marketing Director of our company to enter the graduate school that I want next year. So I will have to make a lunch time with My marketing director. I\'m just nervous that send a invitation to the director. kkkk >> So I will have lunch with my Marketing Director. I\'m just nervous to send an invitation to the director. KkkkAnyway today\'s topic is \"Should you tell the child that he or she was adopted? If so at what age? Or when? Why?\">> CORRECT^^I\'m trying to tell him or her the truth, when he or she completed to elementary school. Because I think It is good that to know the truth faster is.>> I will try to tell him or her the truth, when he or she graduated from elementary because I think it\'s good to know the turth earlier.And I will give time of think about the truth to child.>> And I will give hime time to think about it.Anyway See you on Friday. Bye ~ >> correct^^

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