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It's too hot today. I wore long sleeves shirts when I went to work. I was hard time because of hot weather. The wind is warm, too. Usually, it is not hot in may. I think that this is effect of global warming. Although air conditioner and electric fan is not good for health, we seem to need it during summer. Let't enjoy hot weather. Thank you.
Q1 - She didn't manage to bring the subject up at the meeting because there wasn't enough time.
Q2 - The scandal brought the government down.
Q3 - The computer has brought about more changes in my life than any other invention
Q4 - The band are bringing out a new album in the new year
Q5 - I was brought up in the North
Q6 - She brought off the deal even though nobody thought she was capable of doing it
Q7 - She brought her children in on her own after the divorce
Q8 - Someone who is always unhappy might bring you down.
Q9 - If you're coming tonight, could you bring over some CDs
Q10 - The weather brought my cold on.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
Happy happy Friday!
Good to know that you are not attending any wedding anymore.
Just enjoy your free time this weekend.
Hope you would be able to take a lot of rest.
have fun!
See you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
It\'s too hot today.
>> correct!
I wore long sleeves shirts when I went to work.
>> correct!
I was hard time because of hot weather.
>> It was a hard time for me because of the hot weather.
The wind is warm, too.
>> correct!
Usually, it is not hot in may.
>> correct! (capitalization-May)
I think that this is effect of global warming.
>> correct!
Although air conditioner and electric fan is not good for health, we seem to need it during summer.
>> correct!
Let\'t enjoy hot weather. Thank you.
>> Let\'s enjoy the hot weather. Thank you.
Q1 - She didn\'t manage to bring the subject up at the meeting because there wasn\'t enough time.
>> correct!
Q2 - The scandal brought the government down.
>> correct!
Q3 - The computer has brought about more changes in my life than any other invention
>> correct!
Q4 - The band are bringing out a new album in the new year
>> correct!
Q5 - I was brought up in the North
>> correct!
Q6 - She brought off the deal even though nobody thought she was capable of doing it
>> correct!
Q7 - She brought her children in on her own after the divorce
>> up
Q8 - Someone who is always unhappy might bring you down.
>> correct!
Q9 - If you\'re coming tonight, could you bring over some CDs
>> correct!
Q10 - The weather brought my cold on.
>> correct!
Happy happy Friday!
Good to know that you are not attending any wedding anymore.
Just enjoy your free time this weekend.
Hope you would be able to take a lot of rest.
have fun!
See you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
It\'s too hot today.
>> correct!
I wore long sleeves shirts when I went to work.
>> correct!
I was hard time because of hot weather.
>> It was a hard time for me because of the hot weather.
The wind is warm, too.
>> correct!
Usually, it is not hot in may.
>> correct! (capitalization-May)
I think that this is effect of global warming.
>> correct!
Although air conditioner and electric fan is not good for health, we seem to need it during summer.
>> correct!
Let\'t enjoy hot weather. Thank you.
>> Let\'s enjoy the hot weather. Thank you.
Q1 - She didn\'t manage to bring the subject up at the meeting because there wasn\'t enough time.
>> correct!
Q2 - The scandal brought the government down.
>> correct!
Q3 - The computer has brought about more changes in my life than any other invention
>> correct!
Q4 - The band are bringing out a new album in the new year
>> correct!
Q5 - I was brought up in the North
>> correct!
Q6 - She brought off the deal even though nobody thought she was capable of doing it
>> correct!
Q7 - She brought her children in on her own after the divorce
>> up
Q8 - Someone who is always unhappy might bring you down.
>> correct!
Q9 - If you\'re coming tonight, could you bring over some CDs
>> correct!
Q10 - The weather brought my cold on.
>> correct!
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