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2014-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. I'm feel good because of Firday and Family day!! Today's topic is "Should there be restrictions on smoking in public? What kind of restrictions?" I've never smorking yet, so I'm agree that there be restrictions of smoking. However the smoker also had freedom of expression. so I think that It's good way that to give a place that can smoking to them. Nowadays, the smokers only can smoke the smoking area, so It's better than before it. Have you ever smoked? kkk Anyway have a nice your weekends. See you on Monday. Bye.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I madde some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. I\'ll answer your question on Monday! See you on Monday^^ TGIF^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^I\'m feel good because of Firday and Family day!!>> I feel good because it\'s Friday and it\'s also Family day.Today\'s topic is \"Should there be restrictions on smoking in public? What kind of restrictions?\">> CORRECT^^I\'ve never smorking yet, so I\'m agree that there be restrictions of smoking.>> I don\'t smoke, so I agree that there dhould be restrictions on smoking.However the smoker also had freedom of expression. so I think that It\'s good way that to give a place that can smoking to them.>> However, smokers also have a freedom of expression, so I think it\'s a good way to give them a place to smoke.Nowadays, the smokers only can smoke the smoking area, so It\'s better than before it.>> Nowadays, smokers only smoke in the smoking area, so it\'s better than before.Have you ever smoked? >> correct^^kkkAnyway have a nice your weekends.>> Anyway, have a nice weekend.See you on Monday. Bye. >> correct^^

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