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2014-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Because we can prevent destroy the animal's houses. And we should study about the enviornment. Because the Earth is our base of life. Anyway, learning the animal's houses is important.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom! Wow! You are right. It is because sometimes, people are not aware that there are animals who live there. We should be knowledgable about this to save animals too. You did a great job. I just want you to be careful with the structure of your sentence. Keep on doing your best. See you! Teacher Nina   Because we can prevent destroy the animal\'s houses. >> Because we can prevent destroying animal houses. >> OR: It is important because in that way, we can prevent the houses of animals to be destroyed. And we should study about the enviornment. >> Correct! Because the Earth is our base of life. >> Correct! Anyway, learning the animal\'s houses is important. >> Correct!

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