homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No,I don't think Kings and Queens are rich.
The 21 Korean king "[이름] zo" was famous for integrity.
He was so integrity that he didn't eat whe people had bad crop.
And "Jung zo" was also famous for simple life.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom ^^
Happy Monday!! Let us welcome a new month.
Remember, new challenges and opportunities to come.Let us be confident and strong. ^_^
Wow! Thank you for sharing about the 21st king. ^_^
I am so happy that you are knowledgeable about these important people.
I already made the corrections for your improvement below.
Please check it out and if you have any questions, raise it in class.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
No,I don\'t think Kings and Queens are rich.
>> Correct The 21 Korean king \"[이름] zo\" was famous for integrity.
>> The 21st Korean king named \"[이름] Zo\" was famous because of his integrity.
>> OR: The twenty first Korean king named \"[이름] Zo\" was famous because of his integrity.He was so integrity that he didn\'t eat whe people had bad crop.
>> Did you mean: He didn\'t want people to eat bad crops. ( Can you please explain this more in class ^^ )
>> OR: He didn\'t eat when the people had bad crops. And \"Jung zo\" was also famous for simple life.
>> And \"Jung Zo\" was also famous for his simple life.
>> OR: And \"Jung Zo\" was also famous for having a simple life.
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