homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes! I want to live under the ocean.
Because, I want to explore the bottom of the ocean.
Especially, I want see a Pacific viperfish.
And, I also want to see an Anglerfish
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom!Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic.
Wow! I am sure that you really like to see a lot of fishes.
Do you like snorkeling? What do you usually do when you to go to the beach?
Share your answers in class. Magnificent job! Your sentences are great!
Don\'t forget to use the proper punctuation mark (.) period at the end of your sentence.
Talk to you later.Teacher Nina
Yes! I want to live under the ocean.
>> Correct!Because, I want to explore the bottom of the ocean.
>> Correct!>> OR: It is because I want to explore the bottom of the ocean. Especially, I want see a Pacific viperfish.
>> Correct!And, I also want to see an Anglerfish
>> Correct!
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