homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could back in time and tell a younger version of yourself one thing, what would you tell?
I would tell lotto numbers to ilself.
It is a joke^^
I want to tell to younger me what never miss her who i liked.
Unusually, I didn't have a brave in love.
so, i missed many good girlfriends.
I think that there is a love on a age.
for example, we can do a pure love without any conditions when we is younger.
I am sad, i didn't a pure love.
What would you tell yourself if you go to your post.
강사 첨삭
Haha! I like that [이름]!
If only the younger you can tell the numbers for the lotto grand price right?
Aww.. [이름] it\'s okay.
Time will come and you will find your destiny and your soul mate.
Just be patient because it gonna be worth the wait if that special day will come.
Don\'t rush things [이름].
Everything happens for a reason.
Anyway, you have to enjoy this weekend.
See you!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Teacher Janice
If you could back in time and tell a younger version of yourself one thing, what would you tell?
I would tell lotto numbers to ilself.
>> I will tell the lotto numbers to myself.
It is a joke^^
>> Correct!
>> OR: It\'s just a joke!
I want to tell to younger me what never miss her who i liked.
>> I want to tell the younger me not to miss the girl who like the most.
Unusually, I didn\'t have a brave in love.
>> Actually, I don\'t have a brave heart when it comes to love.
so, i missed many good girlfriends.
>> I missed having many good girl friends.
I think that there is a love on a age.
>> DID YOU MEAN: I think that love will come at the right age.
for example, we can do a pure love without any conditions when we is younger.
>> For example, we can have pure love without any conditions even if we are young.
I am sad, i didn\'t a pure love.
>> I am sad, I didn\'t have a true love.
What would you tell yourself if you go to your post.>> What would you tell yourself if you go to your past.
I would tell lotto numbers to ilself.
>> I will tell the lotto numbers to myself.
It is a joke^^
>> Correct!
>> OR: It\'s just a joke!
I want to tell to younger me what never miss her who i liked.
>> I want to tell the younger me not to miss the girl who like the most.
Unusually, I didn\'t have a brave in love.
>> Actually, I don\'t have a brave heart when it comes to love.
so, i missed many good girlfriends.
>> I missed having many good girl friends.
I think that there is a love on a age.
>> DID YOU MEAN: I think that love will come at the right age.
for example, we can do a pure love without any conditions when we is younger.
>> For example, we can have pure love without any conditions even if we are young.
I am sad, i didn\'t a pure love.
>> I am sad, I didn\'t have a true love.
What would you tell yourself if you go to your post.>> What would you tell yourself if you go to your past.
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