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2014-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition making! Whose advice do you follow more, your parents' or your friends' advice? Explain your answer. I think I am a independent person, and I usually follow my instinct. So, I can be seen as being stubborn. My parents have been supporting me whatever I do, and I am very appreciate it. I have to run my life for myself, so I have a responsibility for that. The principle works same to my parents' lives. I have always loved them, but I have no right to interrupt their life. All I can do is supporting them and listening to what they talk.

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Hi there [이름]!   Thanks for sharing these things to me. You sound to me like you\'re a very good son to your parents. Well, I guess that\'s the best thing we could do for our parents. I hope you\'ll continue to be that wonderful person you are right now. All the good things we do to our parents [이름] be returned to us by our children.   See you in class!   ~Teacher Shanee   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition making!Whose advice do you follow more, your parents\' or your friends\' advice? Explain your answer.I think I am a independent person, and I usually follow my instinct. >>Correct! So, I can be seen as being stubborn. >>Correct! My parents have been supporting me whatever I do, and I am very appreciate it. >>My parents have been supporting me in whatever I do and I really appreciate it. I have to run my life for myself, so I have a responsibility for that. >>Correct! The principle works same to my parents\' lives. >>Correct! OR: >>This principle works to my parents too./This priciple also works to my parents. I have always loved them, but I have no right to interrupt their life. >>Correct! OR: >>I have always loved them but I have no right to be aburden to them. All I can do is supporting them and listening to what they talk. >>All I can do is to support them and listen to them.

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