Homework.

2014-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. I dropped my phone in washer with my mistake, so I will buy a new phone. If I do not call you have to think that his new phone still not working, when you will call in the morning tomorrow. :( Anyway Today's homework is "Do you think it is possible for a person to change? Why?" Yes, I'm sure it is possible. because I always hope to change myself increase and I will. Anyone will also do it, if anyone want it. Of course that is require much effort such as hard trainning and study. Today I should attend a first exam of final test. I'm finishing now. Thank you. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there Luke^^ Thank you for answering my call. I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. I\'ll see you in class! ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^I dropped my phone in washer with my mistake, so I will buy a new phone.>> I mistakenly dropped my phone in the washer, so I need to buy a new one. If I do not call you have to think that his new phone still not working, when you will call in the morning tomorrow. :(>> If you call me in the morning and I don\'t answer, maybe my new phone is still not working. :(Anyway Today\'s homework is \"Do you think it is possible for a person to change? Why?\">> CORRECT^^Yes, I\'m sure it is possible. >> CORRECT^^ because I always hope to change myself increase and I will. >> Because I always want to change myself for the better and I will. Anyone will also do it, if anyone want it.>> Anyone can do it, if they want to.Of course that is require much effort such as hard trainning and study.>> Of course it requires much effort such as hard training and studying hard.Today I should attend a first exam of final test. >> Today, I need to attend my first final exam.I\'m finishing now. >> I\'m almost done.Thank you. >> correct^^Bye Chelsea. >> correct^^

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