Homework
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My basic things to be happ is money.Without money,I can do nothing execpt staying at home.Also,I couldn't even go out and play with my friends.It reveals the dark reality that we can do nothing without money.Not even a happiness.So for me and many other people,money is the top priority to be happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
I commend you for always making your homework.
I really appreciate your time and effort doing it.
Yes, it is true that people are happy with money.
What is important is that we should earn and use money is good way.
I hope that we\'ll have enough money or much of it someday.
T. Barbara^^,
My basic things to be happ is money.
>> Basically, money makes me happy.
>> OR: I\'m happy if I have money.
Without money,I can do nothing execpt staying at home.
>> Without money, I can do nothing but to stay at home.
Also,I couldn\'t even go out and play with my friends.
>> Also, I couldn\'t even go out and hang out with my friends.
It reveals the dark reality that we can do nothing without money.
>> Correct!
>> OR: We can do nothing without money, that is the truth about money.
Not even a happiness.
>> Not even happiness.
So for me and many other people,money is the top priority to be happy.
>> So for me and many other people, money is the top priority to be happy.
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