Homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, if I could do time traveling I'd like to see myself in the past. I was a girl who had hard time finding my own identity during my adolescence so I'd like to visit myself and say 'everything is going to be okay so enjoy your days'.
Also, I'd like to observe younger me because my mother always says that I was smarter and prettier than I'm now. Hahaha :) And I totally agree with the idea that I had much more confidence than I have.So I also like to find the reason. I think it would be fun talking with myself in younger age. Wow I really want to experience it!! ;)
Actually I was shocked to realize that how many times I didn't do my homework. So I was determined to write a wonderful composition today, but topic you gave me is so difficult to write. I hope you will give me easier subject to write tommorrow.kkk
Have a wonderful day, Rose :)
강사 첨삭
Okay, I think the topic today is a bit easier, [이름]^^
I am sorry for draining out your brain cells every day *_*
I hope you understand me doing that, ha ha!
Well, if I could do time traveling I\'d like to see myself in the past.
>>CORRECT!
I was a girl who had hard time finding my own identity during my adolescence so I\'d like to visit myself and say \'everything is going to be okay so enjoy your days\'.
>>I was a girl who had a hard time finding her own identity during adolescence so I\'d like to visit myself and say, \"everything is going to be okay so enjoy your days\".
Also, I\'d like to observe younger me because my mother always says that I was smarter and prettier than I\'m now. Hahaha :)
>>Also, I\'d like to observe the younger me because my mother always says that I was smarter and prettier then. Hahaha :)
And I totally agree with the idea that I had much more confidence than I have.
>>And I totally agree on the idea that I had much more confidence before.
So I also like to find the reason.
>>So I also like to find the reason of everything.
I think it would be fun talking with myself in younger age.
>>I think it would be fun talking with my younger self.
Wow I really want to experience it!! ;)>> Wow, I really want to experience it!! ;)Actually I was shocked to realize that how many times I didn\'t do my homework.
>>Actually I was shocked to realize how many times I didn\'t do my homework. So I was determined to write a wonderful composition today, but topic you gave me is so difficult to write.
>>So I was determined to write a wonderful composition today, but the topic you gave me is so difficult to write about.
I hope you will give me easier subject to write tommorrow.kkk
>>I hope you will give me an easier subject tommorrow.kkk
Have a wonderful day, Rose :)
>>CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.