Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I couldn't speak in Englihs well in this morning so I felt frustration. I think that problem is limitied vocaburary. Of course, grammer and pronunciation are not good, too. However you are helping me and cheering me up. I believe that I can do it well finally. Thank you. The weather is not good. It's cloud and rainy but have a nice day.
1. I'm an engineer. What do you do ?
2. I'll be late back. I'm going to do the shopping.
3. I just cannot find the time to make the accounts. I'm way behind with my work.
4. I'd like you to make more of an effort.
5. I'm going to night school. I really want to do something of myself.
6. Do you like this skirt? I made it myself.
7. I didn't win the competition but I did my best.
8. I'm making enquiries about flights to Miami.
강사 첨삭
It is really a gloomy Thursday since it is also raining in my city.
But don\'t let the weather let yourself and your feelings down Ms. [Name]!
Cheer up! Find ways to be happy and I am very sure that there are a lot of reasons to be happy.
We commit mistakes but it could still be corrected.
I know that you are doing your best. Just keep it up!
Have a great day and take care!
Smile!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I couldn\'t speak in Englihs well in this morning so I felt frustration.
>> I couldn\'t speak in English very well this morning so I felt frustrated.
I think that problem is limitied vocaburary.
>> I think that the problem is that my limited vocabulary.
Of course, grammer and pronunciation are not good, too.
>> correct! (grammar)
However you are helping me and cheering me up.
>> correct!
>> or: However, you are helping and cheering me up.
I believe that I can do it well finally. Thank you.
>> correct!
The weather is not good.
>> correct!
It\'s cloud and rainy but have a nice day.
>> correct!
1. I\'m an engineer. What do you do ?
>> correct!
2. I\'ll be late back. I\'m going to do the shopping.
>> correct!
3. I just cannot find the time to make the accounts. I\'m way behind with my work.
>> correct!
4. I\'d like you to make more of an effort.
>> correct!
5. I\'m going to night school. I really want to do something of myself.
>> make
6. Do you like this skirt? I made it myself.
>> correct!
7. I didn\'t win the competition but I did my best.
>> correct!
8. I\'m making enquiries about flights to Miami.
>> correct!
But don\'t let the weather let yourself and your feelings down Ms. [Name]!
Cheer up! Find ways to be happy and I am very sure that there are a lot of reasons to be happy.
We commit mistakes but it could still be corrected.
I know that you are doing your best. Just keep it up!
Have a great day and take care!
Smile!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I couldn\'t speak in Englihs well in this morning so I felt frustration.
>> I couldn\'t speak in English very well this morning so I felt frustrated.
I think that problem is limitied vocaburary.
>> I think that the problem is that my limited vocabulary.
Of course, grammer and pronunciation are not good, too.
>> correct! (grammar)
However you are helping me and cheering me up.
>> correct!
>> or: However, you are helping and cheering me up.
I believe that I can do it well finally. Thank you.
>> correct!
The weather is not good.
>> correct!
It\'s cloud and rainy but have a nice day.
>> correct!
1. I\'m an engineer. What do you do ?
>> correct!
2. I\'ll be late back. I\'m going to do the shopping.
>> correct!
3. I just cannot find the time to make the accounts. I\'m way behind with my work.
>> correct!
4. I\'d like you to make more of an effort.
>> correct!
5. I\'m going to night school. I really want to do something of myself.
>> make
6. Do you like this skirt? I made it myself.
>> correct!
7. I didn\'t win the competition but I did my best.
>> correct!
8. I\'m making enquiries about flights to Miami.
>> correct!
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