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Hello [이름]!!!

Have a great day and I know you will have a nice lunch. See you tomorrow!!!

I hope you can really have fun in studying English.

Have a great day!!!

T. Jeny

Actually, I can’t fully understand what the title is.

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 Thus, I just write the thing that we discussed in the class this morning.
>>Thus I just wrote about what we discussed in class this morning.
The number of committing suicide has been increasing nowadays, and if the government asks me how to reduce it, then I would like to say they have to make this law below.
>>The number of people committing suicide has been increasing nowadays and if the government will ask me how to reduce it, then I would like to say they have to make this law below.
People, nowadays, are having plenty of pressures and stress from their working place, school, family and something etc...

>>People, nowadays, are having plenty of pressures and stresses from their working place, school, family and something.
And it might partly be solved while they are having communication with the doctors and having some medicine which makes them relaxation.

>>And it might partly be solved while they are having a conversation with doctors and taking some medicines which will help them relax.
 But they are afraid of going to see a mental clinic since most people don’t want to accept they are having a mental problem.

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 Thus, if the government support citizen fees to have a treatment with their personal doctor quarterly for free, and people must submit the result to the government at least once a year.

>> Thus if the government will support the citizens in paying for the treatment then they can go to their personal doctor quarterly for free. After doing so, people must submit the results to the government at least once a year.

 Then they don’t need to hide going to h

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