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Which one is more beautiful for you, the sunset or sunrise? Why do you think so? I think that the sunset is more beautiful. The sunrise is meaningful on January 1st. In Korea, many people want to watch the first sun so we go to east beach or mountain. When I was young, I went to the Haeundae beach why I want to see sun. However, the place was very crowded and it was very cold. This is because it is winter. Furthermore, I can't see it because of bad weather. It is influenced by weather. My memory is not good about the sunrise. However, I saw ths sunset by chance. The color is very beautiful and the mood is nice. I saw it in solemnity. I was touched by the scene. As a result, I think two of them are beautiful anyone but it will be different what experience had. I live in the southe so it is difficult to see the sunrise or sunset. I want to watch beautiful sunrise in the east and sunset in the west. Maybe the scene is different where I see it. Thank you.

Hello again Ms. [Name]!
Well, I agree that both are beautiful.
Sunrise reminds us that we are about to start another day.
That another life has been given to use.
And sunset has really a good view.
We can have the chance to see it a lot of times because we finish our work when its sunset.
The night view is also good after sunset.
And it just reminds us that we have finish another day successfully.
Thanks for today Ms. [Name]
See you next time!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Which one is more beautiful for you, the sunset or sunrise? Why do you think so?
I think that the sunset is more beautiful.
>> I think that sunset is more beautiful.
The sunrise is meaningful on January 1st.
>> correct!
In Korea, many people want to watch the first sun so we go to east beach or mountain.
>> In Korea, many people want to watch the first sun so we go to the beach or mountain in the Eastern part.
When I was young, I went to the Haeundae beach why I want to see sun.
>> When I was young, I went to the Haeundae beach because I want to see the sun.
However, the place was very crowded and it was very cold.
>> correct!
This is because it is winter.
>> correct!
Furthermore, I can\'t see it because of bad weather.
>> Furthermore, I can\'t see it because of the bad weather.
 It is influenced by weather.
>> correct! 
My memory is not good about the sunrise.
>> correct! 
 However, I saw ths sunset by chance.
>> correct!
The color is very beautiful and the mood is nice.
>> correct!
I saw it in solemnity.
>> correct!
 I was touched by the scene.
>> correct!
As a result, I think two of them are beautiful anyone but it will be different what experience had.
>> As a result, I think that the two/any of them are beautiful but it will be different on the experience  that we had.
 I live in the southe so it is difficult to see the sunrise or sunset.
>> I live in the South so it is difficult to see either the sunrise or the sunset.
 I want to watch beautiful sunrise in the east and sunset in the west.
>> I want to watch the beautiful sunrise in the east and the sunset in the west.
Maybe the scene is different where I see it. Thank you.
>> correct!