Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
Recently I didn't do my homework because I had to prepare the final test.
So I'm sorry that. :(
But I will do best again.
Anyway today's homework topic is "Do you think it's acceptable for parents to use corporal punishment as a discipline? Why/why not?"
Sometime I think that the corporal punishment just require. If somechild will go to wrong way, I'll use the coporal punishment with right reason.
If I will teach my child long years later, I will also use the coporal punishment when my child will go to wrong way. But my future wife can be opposite. kkk That is just my think.
And then It's good evening day.
Have a good day.
Bye. Chelsea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
Don\'t worry about it, I totally understand!
Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to to meet all your points.
See you tomorrow^^
Have a great day!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Recently I didn\'t do my homework because I had to prepare the final test.
>> Recently, I didn\'t do my homework because I had to prepare for my final test.So I\'m sorry that. :(
>> So I\'m sorry about that. :(But I will do best again.>> But I will do my best again.Anyway today\'s homework topic is \"Do you think it\'s acceptable for parents to use corporal punishment as a discipline? Why/why not?\">> CORRECT^^Sometime I think that the corporal punishment just require.
>> Do you mean, \"Sometimes I think that corporal punishment is a requirement.\"
If somechild will go to wrong way, I\'ll use the coporal punishment with right reason.>> If the child did something wrong, I will use corporal punichment for the right reason.If I will teach my child long years later, I will also use the coporal punishment when my child will go to wrong way.
>> If I teach my child after long years, I will also use corporal punishment when my child did something wrong.
But my future wife can be opposite. kkk That is just my think.>> But my future wife might be against. Kkk. That is just my opinion.And then It\'s good evening day.>> And then it\'s a good evening.Have a good day.
>> CORRECT^^Bye. Chelsea.
>> correct^^
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