Homework.

2014-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hellow Chelsea. It's really hot night. Wow.. I can't take a rest at home because of hot. I'm still using the air-conditioner but I'm worrying about the electric pay. It is hard to living alone. I miss my parent's home. there will be cool. Anyway today's topic is "What do you think is the greatest cause of stress for most people?" I think the greatest cause of stress is the communications that people using. Because not good communications that each people using give us a lot of emotions, such as a envy, anger etc. So we have to calm down. especially it's hot season like this. Anyway, although i have a insomnia cause of hot night, you have a good night. kk Bye. See you tomorrow.

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Hi there Luke^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was anle to meet your points. Anyway, if you have some questions, don\'t hesitate to ask me in our class! See you later^^ Rise and Shine^^ ~T.Chelsea Hellow Chelsea. >> Hello Chelsea.It\'s really hot night. Wow.. I can\'t take a rest at home because of hot.>> It\'s really a hot night. Wow! I can\'t take a rest at home because it\'s hot.I\'m still using the air-conditioner but I\'m worrying about the electric pay.>> I\'m still using the air-conditioner but I\'m worried about the electric bill.It is hard to living alone. >> It\'s hard to live alone. I miss my parent\'s home. >> CORRECT^^ there will be cool.>> There, it will be cool.Anyway today\'s topic is \"What do you think is the greatest cause of stress for most people?\">>  CORRECT^^I think the greatest cause of stress is the communications that people using.>> I think the greatest cause of stress is communicating with other people.Because not good communications that each people using give us a lot of emotions, such as a envy, anger etc.>> Because if we don\'t communicate with each other well, it gives us a lot of emotions, such as envy, anger and etc.So we have to calm down. >> CORRECT^^ especially it\'s hot season like this.>> Especially in a hot season like this.Anyway, although i have a insomnia cause of hot night, you have a good night. kk>> Anyway, although I have insomnia because it\'s hot, you have a good night. Kkk.Bye. See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT^^

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