Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
Korea Team can't won the first game in World cup in morning.
I talked that our Korea team was winning in game when we make a call in the morning.
And then our team give a goal to Russia. so I'm not happy :(
Anyway today's topic is "What other language do you think must also be widely spoken next to English?"
I think second widely spoken language is Spanish.
Spanish is based on another pattern than English. and to use the language to variety place & variety country.
It's very useful. so If I influent in English, I hope to learn the language.
Can you talk another language?
Wow It's excited.
And then, We let's talk more tomorrow.
I will go home now kkk
Anyway Bye. Good night.~~
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for doing your homework!
I made some corrections and please let me know if you have some questions.
I\'ll call yu tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^Korea Team can\'t won the first game in World cup in morning.>> Korean Team didn\'t win the first game in World cup this morning.I talked that our Korea team was winning in game when we make a call in the morning.
>> We talked about the Korean team winning this game when we had our class.And then our team give a goal to Russia. so I\'m not happy :(>> And then our team gave Russia a goal, so I\'m not happy. :(Anyway today\'s topic is \"What other language do you think must also be widely spoken next to English?\">> CORRECT^^I think second widely spoken language is Spanish.
>> I thinkthe second most widely spoken language is Spanish.Spanish is based on another pattern than English. and to use the language to variety place & variety country. >> Spanish has a different pattern from Emglish and you can use that language to variety of places and variety of countries.It\'s very useful. so If I influent in English, I hope to learn the language.>> It\'s very useful. So if I am fleunt in English, I want to learn another language.Can you talk another language?>> Can you speak another language?Wow It\'s excited.>> Wow, it\'s exciting.And then, We let\'s talk more tomorrow.
>> And then, let\'s talk more about this tomorrow.I will go home now kkk
>> CORRECT^^Anyway Bye. Good night.~~
>> CORRECT^^
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