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2014-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Because rules made, because should obey the rules. There are no resons why we should follow the rules. We must obey the rules. but we don't have to obey the bad rules like killing someone.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom! I apologize for the late response. Thank you very much for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. I totally agree with you. We should know what is right and wrong. Kindly go over the corrections I provided for you. Talk to you tomorrow.Teacher Nina   Because rules made, because should obey the rules.>> Because rules are made, so we should obey it.There are no resons why we should follow the rules. >> There is no reason why we shouldn\'t follow the rules. We must obey the rules. >> Correctbut we don\'t have to obey the bad rules like killing someone. >> But we shouldn\'t obey bad rules such as killing someone.

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