Homework.

2014-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. Today in my office is very quite.It's good time for study for my final test but I am really sleepy now. kk So I will take a stretching after finish this homework. Anyway today's topic is "In a marriage, do you think one person should handle the finances, or both? Why?" I think that It is good that the handle finances give to only one person, because the final representatives always one. ?? (This sentences are some difficult...;;) But the money flows will have to share for each family. that is just my think. I'm not sure that because I'm not marry yet. kkk Today's topic is some difficult. wow.. Anyway We will talk more tomorrow. Bye.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some correstions and I hope I was able to meet all your points. See you later^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Today in my office is very quite. >> Today is very quiet in my office. It\'s good time for study for my final test but I am really sleepy now. kk>> It\'s a good time to study for my final test but I am really sleepy now. Kkk.So I will take a stretching after finish this homework.>> So, I will stretch after I finish this homework.Anyway today\'s topic is \"In a marriage, do you think one person should handle the finances, or both? Why?\">> CORRECT^^I think that It is good that the handle finances give to only one person, because the final representatives always one. ?? (This sentences are some difficult...;;) >> I think that is will be good if only one person will handle the finances, because we only have one representative in the end.But the money flows will have to share for each family.>> But all familty member should share some money.that is just my think. >> That is just my opinion. I\'m not sure that because I\'m not marry yet. kkk>> I\'m not sure about that because I\'m not yet married. Kkk.Today\'s topic is some difficult. wow..>> Today\'s topic is a bit difficult. Wow!Anyway We will talk more tomorrow.>> Anyway, let\'s talk more about this tomorrow.Bye. >> CORRECT^^

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