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2014-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

It's too hot. I already use electroinic fan but airconditioner is not use yet. This is becuase we want to reduce electronic bill at work. Also I don't have it at home. I asked for it to my husband. He told me we don't need it yet. We decided to buy it after moving to apartment. Hmm, if we live in high floor, we don't need it.kkk. Of course, I prefer natural wind. I can take a shower when it is really hot. It's good method. HAHAHA. Have a nice day. Thank you. 1. I bought it seven years ago and I haven't had any problems yet. 2. I read your report but I still need to talk to you. 3. Is it already nine o' clock? 4. Oh no! It's still raining. 5. I'm feeling lazy. I'm still in bed. 6. Is the pizza cooked already ? 7. I cannot take on any more jobs. I've already got too much work. 8. I cannot believe it. Half past four in the morning and you are already up!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]! Happy Friday!
Summer season is already coming in your country so it\'s becoming hotter.
And using air-conditioning is really quite expensive so try to find others ways to make yourself cool and feel better.
Thanks for answering your homework.
See you next time!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

It\'s too hot.
>>  correct!
 I already use electroinic fan but airconditioner is not use yet.

>>  I am already using the electric fan because the airconditioner could not yet be used.
This is becuase we want to reduce electronic bill at work.

>>  This is because we want to reduce the electric bill at work.
Also I don\'t have it at home.

>>  correct!
I asked for it to my husband.

>>  correct!
He told me we don\'t need it yet.

>>  correct!
We decided to buy it after moving to apartment.

>>  We decided to buy it after moving to our new apartment. 

Hmm, if we live in high floor, we don\'t need it.kkk.

>>  Hmm, if we live in the high floor, we don\'t need it. kkkk
Of course, I prefer natural wind.

>>  Of course, I prefer the natural wind.
 I can take a shower when it is really hot.

>>  correct!
It\'s good method. HAHAHA.

>>  It is a good method. hahaha.
Have a nice day. Thank you.

>>  correct! 
1. I bought it seven years ago and I haven\'t had any problems yet.

>>  correct! 
2. I read your report but I still need to talk to you.

>>  correct! 
3. Is it already nine o\' clock?

>>  correct! 
4. Oh no! It\'s still raining.

>>  correct! 
5. I\'m feeling lazy. I\'m still in bed.

>>  correct! 
6. Is the pizza cooked already ?

>>  correct! 
7. I cannot take on any more jobs. I\'ve already got too much work.

>>  correct! 
8. I cannot believe it. Half past four in the morning and you are already up!
 
>> still

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