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2014-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. It's already Friday and now 2:00 p.m. so It's also already reach to time that go home. kkk Today Korea have been doing the civil defense training. so my office was made noise. Anyway today's topic is "If you are granted "three material wishes", what kind of things will you wish for? Why?" I will choice a house, a fire machine and Knife. I often like and read a kind of book that to survival in uninhabited island on sea. It show interesting thins such as, how to survival there. How to catch the fishes or fruits etc. So If i will live in uninhabited island alone, I choice this 3 things. What do you choice three material? Anyway we will talk on Monday. Bye

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Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
If I\'m granted three material wishes, I will choose a house, a good business and a car.
I will explain it to you on Monday.
Have a great day and take care^^
See you on Monday!!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^
It\'s already Friday and now 2:00 p.m. so It\'s also already reach to time that go home. kkk
>> It\'s already Friday and now 2 pm, so it\'s already time to go home. Kkkk
Today Korea have been doing the civil defense training. so my office was made noise.
>> Today Korea has been doing a civil defense training, so my office is really noisy.
Anyway today\'s topic is \"If you are granted \"three material wishes\", what kind of things will you wish for? Why?\"

>> CORRECT^^
I will choice a house, a fire machine and Knife.

>> I will choose a house, a fire machine and a knife.
I often like and read a kind of book that to survival in uninhabited island on sea.

>> I often like to read a book about survival in uninhabited island surrounded by water.
It show interesting thins such as, how to survival there. How to catch the fishes or fruits etc.

>> It tells us a lot of interesting things on how to survive there, how to catch fishes or get fruits and etc.
So If i will live in uninhabited island alone, I choice this 3 things.

>> So, if I live in uninhabited island alone, I will choose these 3 things.
What do you choice three material?

>> What three materials will you choose?
Anyway we will talk on Monday.

>> Anyway, we will talk again on Monday.
Bye
>> CORRECT^^

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