Homework.

2014-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Oh my god... my homework fly gone just now. because I pushed Backspace button with my mistake. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OTL... i will write again... I'm fine... I will have to go to business trip on Thursday. so I maybe can't attend our class. but I will try to attend our class in business trip. If I don't attend our class from Thursday until 4th on July, you don't surprise for me. :( Anyway today's topic is "When you think of peace, what image do you think of?" I think of peace, first I can think a pigeon. Because The Pigeon is symbol of peace in Korea. But these days the pigeon makes a lot of problem. I feel sad the pigeon makes a lot of problem.... Actually I'm sorry I'm really hungry now. so I'm fining it now.. :( It's nice evening. Have a nice evening. Bye.

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Hi there Luke^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. Anyway, I have some questions about yo homework^^ I\'ll ask you tomorrow! Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Oh my god... my homework fly gone just now. because I pushed Backspace button with my mistake. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OTL...>> Oh my god! My homework is gone because I mistakenly pushed the backspace button. OTL.i will write again... I\'m fine... >> I will write again. I\'m fine.I will have to go to business trip on Thursday. so I maybe can\'t attend our class. but I will try to attend our class in business trip.If I don\'t attend our class from Thursday until 4th on July, you don\'t surprise for me. :(>> I have to go ona business trip on Thursday, so maybe I cannot attend our class but I will try my best to attend our class during my business trip.Anyway today\'s topic is \"When you think of peace, what image do you think of?\">> CORRECT^^I think of peace, first I can think a pigeon. Because The Pigeon is symbol of peace in Korea. But these days the pigeon makes a lot of problem.I feel sad the pigeon makes a lot of problem....>> When I think about peace, the first thing I can think about is pigeon, because a pigeon is a symbol of peace in Korea. But these days, pigeon can cause a lot of problems. I feel sad that pigeon cause a lot of problems.Actually I\'m sorry I\'m really hungry now. so I\'m fining it now.. :( >> Actually, I\'m sorry. I\'m really hungry right no, so I\'m finishing it now. :(It\'s nice evening. Have a nice evening. >> It\'s a nice evening. Have a nice evening.Bye. >> CORRECT^^

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