Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
I'm doing homework with my over work time in the office. kk
Because tomorrow I have to go on a business trip to another city. so I was busy for preparing it.I'm hungry... :( kk
Anyway today's topic is "If you had one wish, what would you wish for?"
If i have on wish, I will pray that "GOD, can you give a GOD Power? like the movie Bruce Almighty"
I think it is really fun. sometime rescue some people, sometime go on a picnic above sky etc..
I'm sure I'm crazy for over time work. kkk
Anyway If I don't take a phone tomorrow, you think that he goes on a business trip, so he can't take a phone...
You don't surprise for me. kk
Anyway It's nice evening. have a good day
Bye.~
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for still doing your homework in spite of your busy schedule. (;
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points^^
I\'m sure it\'ll be really fun to have powers!
Anyway, I\'ll call you tomorrow^^
Enjoy your business trip!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea. >> CORRECT^^I\'m doing homework with my over work time in the office. kk
>> I\'m doing my homework in the office while I work overtime. KkkBecause tomorrow I have to go on a business trip to another city. so I was busy for preparing it.I\'m hungry... :( kk >> Because tomorrow I have to go on a business trip to another cuty, so I am busy preparing for it. I\'m hungry. :( Kkk.Anyway today\'s topic is \"If you had one wish, what would you wish for?\">> CORRECT^^If i have on wish, I will pray that \"GOD, can you give a GOD Power? like the movie Bruce Almighty\">> If I have one wish, I will pray to GOD to give me a power like the movie \'Bruce Almighty\'.I think it is really fun. sometime rescue some people, sometime go on a picnic above sky etc..>> I think it is really fun to rescue some people ans go an a picnic above the sky and ect.I\'m sure I\'m crazy for over time work. kkk>> I\'m sure I sound crazy because of my overtime. KkkAnyway If I don\'t take a phone tomorrow, you think that he goes on a business trip, so he can\'t take a phone...You don\'t surprise for me. kk>> Anyway, I don\'t answer your call tomorrow, just think that I\'m on a business trip, so I can\'t answer the phone.Anyway It\'s nice evening. have a good day
>> Anyway, it\'s a nice evening. Have a good day!Bye.~
>> CORRECT^^
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