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Teacher Eva
I\'m fear of all the bugs.
>>I have a fear of bugs.
Sometimes I used to find a nail-size bug in my room who may comes from the veranda.
>>One time, I found a nail-sized bug in my room that might come from the veranda.
Whenever I found it, I screamed and asked my parent to kill it.
>>When I saw it, I screamed and asked my parent to kill it.
I originally didn\'t have the disposition to be fear of the bug.
>>I wasn\'t originally scared of bugs.
When I was a child, I could hold and play with all of the bugs from the dragonfly to the caterpillar.
>>When I was a child, I could hold and play with all kinds of bugs from dragonflies to caterpillars.
At the time, I had only curiosity instead of fear to bugs.
At that time, I was only curious about bugs instead of fearing them.
But, as I grew up, I was changed although there was not a especial accident.
>>But, as I grew up, it changed although there was no special incident.
Is it that the fear of the bug may be the feeling to be learn socially rather than the instinctive feeling?
>>Is the fear of bugs can be acquired socially rather than instinctively?
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Hi~ Eva~ WoW! I slept all day! I may become more and more fatigued during final exam period. I should prepare my text book for our class from now. ^^ See you in a while~
>>Hi, Eva! Wow! I slept all day! I might be feeling very much fatigue during the final examination period. I should prepare my text book for our class from now on. See you in a while!
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