Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you think yourself comparatively fortunate, list three good things you have and state how they are helpful for your life.
At first, I have a great parents. They are very diligent, heathy and kind. They have assisted my life for whole life. They love me and give all for me. Thanks to my parents, I have two younger brothers. You know that we can't choose our parents. It is just the Lord's present. In my case, I think it is comparatively fortune to me.
Second, to get marry my husband. He is nice husband. Of course, we have some conflicts but it is necessity. We can communicate deeply and understand each other. Furthermore, I feel that he loves me and I really love him. He is my first lover except for one-sided love. I don't have experience about farewell. I think it is lucky to me.
Finally, my job is a part of fortune. I love my work. Actually, it is sometime very tough. However, I can enjoy it and I think it is fruitful. And I feel happy from time to tiem. Wow, I'm lucky person.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [Name]!
I think we should all feel fortunate about our lives because most of all, we are still alive, breathing, and kicking.
And in addition that we should feel fortunate about is our job, our family, and our health.
You are lucky to all those things Ms. [Name]!
See you again tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you think yourself comparatively fortunate, list three good things you have and state how they are helpful for your life.
At first, I have a great parents.
>> At first, I have great parents.
They are very diligent, heathy and kind.
>> correct! (healthy)
They have assisted my life for whole life.
>> They have assisted me in my whole life.
They love me and give all for me.
>> They love me and gave everything to me.
Thanks to my parents, I have two younger brothers.
>> correct!
You know that we can\'t choose our parents.
>> correct!
It is just the Lord\'s present.
>> correct!
In my case, I think it is comparatively fortune to me.
>> In my case, I think it is comparatively a fortune on my part.
Second, to get marry my husband.
>> Second, I got married with my husband.
He is nice husband.
>> He is a nice husband.
Of course, we have some conflicts but it is necessity.
>> Of course, we have some conflicts but it is a necessity.
We can communicate deeply and understand each other.
>> correct!
Furthermore, I feel that he loves me and I really love him.
>> correct!
He is my first lover except for one-sided love.
>> He is my first lover except for a one-sided love.
I don\'t have experience about farewell.
>> I did not experience about saying goodbye.
I think it is lucky to me.
>> I think that I am lucky.
Finally, my job is a part of fortune.
>> Finally, my job is a part of my fortune.
I love my work.
>> correct!
Actually, it is sometime very tough.
>> Actually, it is sometimes very tough.
However, I can enjoy it and I think it is fruitful.
>> correct!
And I feel happy from time to tiem.
>> correct! (time)
Wow, I\'m lucky person.
>> Wow. I\'m a lucky person.
I think we should all feel fortunate about our lives because most of all, we are still alive, breathing, and kicking.
And in addition that we should feel fortunate about is our job, our family, and our health.
You are lucky to all those things Ms. [Name]!
See you again tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you think yourself comparatively fortunate, list three good things you have and state how they are helpful for your life.
At first, I have a great parents.
>> At first, I have great parents.
They are very diligent, heathy and kind.
>> correct! (healthy)
They have assisted my life for whole life.
>> They have assisted me in my whole life.
They love me and give all for me.
>> They love me and gave everything to me.
Thanks to my parents, I have two younger brothers.
>> correct!
You know that we can\'t choose our parents.
>> correct!
It is just the Lord\'s present.
>> correct!
In my case, I think it is comparatively fortune to me.
>> In my case, I think it is comparatively a fortune on my part.
Second, to get marry my husband.
>> Second, I got married with my husband.
He is nice husband.
>> He is a nice husband.
Of course, we have some conflicts but it is necessity.
>> Of course, we have some conflicts but it is a necessity.
We can communicate deeply and understand each other.
>> correct!
Furthermore, I feel that he loves me and I really love him.
>> correct!
He is my first lover except for one-sided love.
>> He is my first lover except for a one-sided love.
I don\'t have experience about farewell.
>> I did not experience about saying goodbye.
I think it is lucky to me.
>> I think that I am lucky.
Finally, my job is a part of fortune.
>> Finally, my job is a part of my fortune.
I love my work.
>> correct!
Actually, it is sometime very tough.
>> Actually, it is sometimes very tough.
However, I can enjoy it and I think it is fruitful.
>> correct!
And I feel happy from time to tiem.
>> correct! (time)
Wow, I\'m lucky person.
>> Wow. I\'m a lucky person.
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