Homework
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I made a mistake when I did my homework yesterday. I didn't read the topic exactly. I should choosed for or since. I am ashamed. Weekend is coming soon so I love Friday. I heard that the movie, Tranceformer is on showing. I'd like to watch it and I want to eat delicious food. Um.. Weekend is too short. kkk
Pretend that you are 65 years old. Write advice to your middle school self.
When I was middle school student, I liked to do with my friends. At that time, friends were best to my life. I have met them continually. So I'd like to tell them 'make good friends and become a good friend'.
loving own their-selves is most important. They get a stress and their dignity is lower because of grade. They need to know that they are very precious in itself regardless of grade. They each have different talents. They need to find theirs and they need to have a dream. Maybe they want to be adult fast but I want that they love their pure life.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Ms. [Name] and happy weekend!
I hope that you will make out of the most of your free time.
Just take a good rest and enjoy.
Do not worry about many things.
See you next week and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I made a mistake when I did my homework yesterday.
>> correct!
I didn\'t read the topic exactly.
>> correct!
I should choosed for or since.
>> I should choose between for and since.
I am ashamed.
>> correct!
Weekend is coming soon so I love Friday.
>> correct!
I heard that the movie, Tranceformer is on showing.
>> I heard that the movie Transformers is now showing.
I\'d like to watch it and I want to eat delicious food. Um..
>> correct!
Weekend is too short. kkk
>> correct!
Pretend that you are 65 years old. Write advice to your middle school self.
When I was middle school student, I liked to do with my friends.
>> When I was a middle school student, I like to hang out with my friends.
At that time, friends were best to my life.
>> At that time, my friends were the best thing in my life.
I have met them continually.
>> correct!
>> or; I continuously meet them.
So I\'d like to tell them \'make good friends and become a good friend\'.
>>correct!
loving own their-selves is most important.
>> Loving ourselves is the most important.
They get a stress and their dignity is lower because of grade.
>> They get stress and their dignity is lowered because of their grades.
They need to know that they are very precious in itself regardless of grade.
>> They need to know that they are very precious regardless of their grade.
They each have different talents.
>> Each of them have different talents.
They need to find theirs and they need to have a dream.
>> They need to find themselves and they need to have a dream.
Maybe they want to be adult fast but I want that they love their pure life.
>> Maybe they want to be an adult fast but I just want them to love themselves.
I hope that you will make out of the most of your free time.
Just take a good rest and enjoy.
Do not worry about many things.
See you next week and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I made a mistake when I did my homework yesterday.
>> correct!
I didn\'t read the topic exactly.
>> correct!
I should choosed for or since.
>> I should choose between for and since.
I am ashamed.
>> correct!
Weekend is coming soon so I love Friday.
>> correct!
I heard that the movie, Tranceformer is on showing.
>> I heard that the movie Transformers is now showing.
I\'d like to watch it and I want to eat delicious food. Um..
>> correct!
Weekend is too short. kkk
>> correct!
Pretend that you are 65 years old. Write advice to your middle school self.
When I was middle school student, I liked to do with my friends.
>> When I was a middle school student, I like to hang out with my friends.
At that time, friends were best to my life.
>> At that time, my friends were the best thing in my life.
I have met them continually.
>> correct!
>> or; I continuously meet them.
So I\'d like to tell them \'make good friends and become a good friend\'.
>>correct!
loving own their-selves is most important.
>> Loving ourselves is the most important.
They get a stress and their dignity is lower because of grade.
>> They get stress and their dignity is lowered because of their grades.
They need to know that they are very precious in itself regardless of grade.
>> They need to know that they are very precious regardless of their grade.
They each have different talents.
>> Each of them have different talents.
They need to find theirs and they need to have a dream.
>> They need to find themselves and they need to have a dream.
Maybe they want to be adult fast but I want that they love their pure life.
>> Maybe they want to be an adult fast but I just want them to love themselves.
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