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Thanks for your advice :) In my sentence young people means university students!! These days, I think young people are tend to depend on their parents too much. For example, the parents give pocket money, college tuition and even buy a car. Young people can both study and earn the money, but they didnt because it makes them feel physically tired. Also, whenever they are in danger they called to their parents to solve it. Therefore, i think for young people the great challenge is to be an independent person. Experience and solve anything by themselves.

Hello [이름]!   Thanks for sending in this one ;) I totally agree that independence is the greatest challenge for young people. They should accept the fact that their parents will not be around forever to support them. They should have the sense of responsibility while they are young ;)   See you in class!   ~teacher Becca~   Here are some corrections and alternatives:     Thanks for your advice :) >> correct! >> OR: Thanks for giving me an advice.In my sentence young people means university students!! >> I meant \"young people\" with university students in my sentence.These days, I think young people are tend to depend on their parents too much. >> These days, I think young people tend to depend on their parents too much. >> OR: Young people tend to depend too much on their parents nowadays. For example, the parents give pocket money, college tuition and even buy a car. >> A good example is when parents give their children pocket money, pay for their tuition fee, and even buy them a car. Young people can both study and earn the money, but they didnt because it makes them feel physically tired. >> Young people can work and study at the same time, but they don\'t because it will make them feel physically tired. Also, whenever they are in danger they called to their parents to solve it. >> When they are in trouble, they also call their parents to solve it. >> OR: Whenever they are in trouble, they try to reach out to their parents for help. Therefore, i think for young people the great challenge is to be an independent person. >> Therefore, I think that being independent is the greatest challenge for young people. Experience and solve anything by themselves. >> They should learn to solve everything by themselves by gaining experience.