homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Tom!
Wow! That\'s nice to hear!
I am sure that you were really excited to use your mobile phone.
Is that your reward for doing great in your studies?
You deserve it. ^^ I\'m so happy for you.
You are right, we should use our mobile phones wisely.
Tell me more about the features of it in class.
Talk to you soon. I\'d like you to go over the corrections below.
I think it was a bit tricky for you. If you have any questions, let us discuss it in class.
Teacher Nina
1.b
>> A
2.a
>> B
3.a
>> CORRECT
4.b
>> C
5.b
>> C
6.a
>> CORRECT
7.b
>> CORRECT
8.b
>> CORRECT
9.a
>> C
10.b
>> CORRECT
I bought a cell phone two days ago.
>> CORRECT
I,m so happy to get cell phone.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I am so happy that I have a cellphone.
But, I\'ll not play the games.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: But I won\'t play games.
And I also won\'t do kakao Talk
>> CORRECT ( check: Kakao Talk ^^)
I\'ll use my cell phone to be smart not fully
>> Did you mean: I\'ll use my cellphone wisely.
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