Homework
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If you had 10 copies of yourself today, what would you have them do?
Wow, it is very fantastic. I want to stay my home so I will just spend time for myself. I will make them(two of copies) clean and cook. I'd like to get massage from her(one of copy). I will send one copy to place of work. She will work instead of me. I will send three of copies my parent's house because my parents are very busy so they have to help them. one of them is make onion juice and another is have to harvest potatoes. The other have to clean my parents' house. Also, I need delicious food such as watermelon, tubu and so on. Therefore one of them have to go market for buying something. There are two of me yet. hahaha. She have to visit my grandmother house. She helps my grandmother and buys clothes and meals for her. The last one will be sended to my work. This is because there are a lot of works. Although that is to me, I make them work. It's sad. Oh, I'm sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Wow! I guess you do not need 10 copies of yourself.
What you need is a helper. kkk
You make them work so hard. hahaha
I feel sorry to them.
Just kidding.
Anyway, having copies of ourselves is really fun especially when we have to do a lot of things.
See you tomorrow!
Have a great day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you had 10 copies of yourself today, what would you have them do?
Wow, it is very fantastic.
>> correct!
I want to stay my home so I will just spend time for myself.
>> I want to stay at home so I will juts spend time for myself.
I will make them(two of copies) clean and cook.
>> I will make 2 of my copies clean and cook.
I\'d like to get massage from her(one of copy).
>> I\'d like to get a massage from another/
I will send one copy to place of work.
>> I will send a copy of myself to my workplace.
She will work instead of me.
>> correct!
I will send three of copies my parent\'s house because my parents are very busy so they have to help them.
>> I will send 3 of my copies to my parent\'s house because my parents are very busy so they have to help them.
one of them is make onion juice and another is have to harvest potatoes.
>> One of them is to make some onion juice and the other has to harvest some potatoes.
The other have to clean my parents\' house.
>> The other has to clean my parent\'s house.
Also, I need delicious food such as watermelon, tubu and so on.
>> correct!
Therefore one of them have to go market for buying something.
>> Therefore, one of them has to go to the market to buy something.
There are two of me yet. hahaha.
>> There are two more left. hahaha/
She have to visit my grandmother house.
>> She has to visit my grandmother\'s house.
She helps my grandmother and buys clothes and meals for her.
>> She has to help my grandmother and buys some clothes and meals for her.
The last one will be sended to my work.
>> I will send the last one to my work.
This is because there are a lot of works.
>> correct!
Although that is to me, I make them work. It\'s sad. Oh, I\'m sorry
>> Although it is me, I have to make them work. It\'s sad and I feel sorry to them.
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