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2014-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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to after across down to If I pass the invention contest,I'll go to America. I want to go to the white house. And I also want to go to the LA zoo. Mostly,I want to go to the Smithsonian Instition.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom!

Of course! You are going to win. ^-^

I searched for Smithsonian Institution.

Oh my god! I also want to go there.

I know that you will take a picture there. Hihihi!

Can\'t wait to talk to you. ^_^

Please be careful with your verb tenses.

If you have any questions, you can raise it in class. Happy Monday.

Teacher Nina

 

to

>> CORRECT!
after

>> CORRECT!
across

>> CORRECT!
down

>> BACK
to

>> CORRECT!

If I pass the invention contest,I\'ll go to America.

>> If I will pass the invention contest, I\'ll go to America.

>> OR: If I will be able to pass the invention contest, I\'ll go to the U.S.
I want to go to the white house.

>> CORRECT!  ( check: White House ^^)
And I also want to go to the LA zoo.

>> I also want to go to the zoo in L.A.

>> OR: I want to visit the zoo in Los Angeles.
Mostly,I want to go to the Smithsonian Instition.

>> Most of all, I want to go to the Smithsonian Institution. ( spelling check: institution ^^)

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