homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
Of course! You are going to win. ^-^
I searched for Smithsonian Institution.
Oh my god! I also want to go there.
I know that you will take a picture there. Hihihi!
Can\'t wait to talk to you. ^_^
Please be careful with your verb tenses.
If you have any questions, you can raise it in class. Happy Monday.
Teacher Nina
to
>> CORRECT!
after
>> CORRECT!
across
>> CORRECT!
down
>> BACK
to
>> CORRECT!
If I pass the invention contest,I\'ll go to America.
>> If I will pass the invention contest, I\'ll go to America.
>> OR: If I will be able to pass the invention contest, I\'ll go to the U.S.
I want to go to the white house.
>> CORRECT! ( check: White House ^^)
And I also want to go to the LA zoo.
>> I also want to go to the zoo in L.A.
>> OR: I want to visit the zoo in Los Angeles.
Mostly,I want to go to the Smithsonian Instition.
>> Most of all, I want to go to the Smithsonian Institution. ( spelling check: institution ^^)
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