Homework

Use words to build your perfect house. Where would it be? What would it look like? How many rooms would there be? What would those rooms be like? I just want to live great apartment because it seems to be most comfortable. In my case, I satisfy now that if there are three rooms, two bathrooms, a large living room and a kitchen in the apartment. I know that when new apartment build, it is used great materials to make wall, bath, closet and so on. On the other hand, my husband want to build nice house by himself. He want to have a big yard. We have to be diligent because cleaning is required everyday. He will building that is simple and mordern. I hope that the building is convenient and useful. However, I heard there are a lot of luxury and high quality villa in peaceful place in Seoul. I'd like to live in there but I will have been living a rural area. Therefore, if I have a large land, I'd like to build beautiful house like luxury villa. Thank you.

Hello Ms. [Name]!
Wow, your dream house is quite beautiful.
I really do hope that one day you would have your own house.
Of course you will.
There is nothing impossible if you want to and if you believe.
Thanks for your time today!
See you tomorrow!
Take care too!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Use words to build your perfect house. Where would it be? What would it look like? How many rooms would there be? What would those rooms be like?
I just want to live great apartment because it seems to be most comfortable.
>>  I just want to live in a great apartment because it seems to be the most comfortable.
In my case, I satisfy now that if there are three rooms, two bathrooms, a large living room and a kitchen in the apartment.
>>  In my case, I am now satisfied  if there are three rooms, two bathrooms, a large living room and a kitchen in the apartment.
I know that when new apartment build, it is used great materials to make wall, bath, closet and so on.
>>  I know that when a new apartment is build, they used great materials to make wall, bath, closet and so on.
On the other hand, my husband want to build nice house by himself.
>>  On the other hand, my husband wants to build a nice house by himself.
He want to have a big yard.
>>  He wants to have a big yard.
We have to be diligent because cleaning is required everyday. 
>>  correct!
He will building that is simple and mordern.
>>  He wants to build it simple yet modern.
I hope that the building is convenient and useful.
 >>  correct! 
However, I heard there are a lot of luxury and high quality villa in peaceful place in Seoul.
>>  However, I heard that there are a lot of luxurious and high quality villas in a peaceful place in Seoul.
I\'d like to live in there but I will have been living a rural area.
>>  I\'d like to live there but I have been living in the rural area.
Therefore, if I have a large land, I\'d like to build beautiful house like luxury villa. Thank you.
>>  Therefore, if I have a large land, I\'d like to build a beautiful house like a luxurious villa. Thank you.