Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
I'm doing homework with my final conference in Daejeon.
Thing that I could see in Daejeon for two weeks are just Daejeon station and our conference hotel, only two... kk It's really wonderful ~ :( kk
Anyway today's topic is "Do you think biological parents should always have a right to keep their identity secret from the children they give up for adoption? Why or why not?"
Although their identity keep secret to other people, but when the children will grow up and they want to know their biological parents, we have to show the informations. That is ethics. That is just my opinion. kk
Have a nice day. We talk more tomorrow.
ByE ~!
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework in spite of your busy schedule!!
Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
I\'ll call you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^I\'m doing homework with my final conference in Daejeon.>> I\'m doing my homework in my final conference here in Daejeon.Thing that I could see in Daejeon for two weeks are just Daejeon station and our conference hotel, only two... kk It\'s really wonderful ~ :( kk>> The only two things I can see in Daejeon for two weeks are the Daejeon station and our conference hotel. It\'s reall wonderful.Anyway today\'s topic is \"Do you think biological parents should always have a right to keep their identity secret from the children they give up for adoption? Why or why not?\">> CORRECT^^Although their identity keep secret to other people, but when the children will grow up and they want to know their biological parents, we have to show the informations.
>> Although their identities are keep secret, but when the children will grow up , they want to know their biological parents, we have to show the informations.
That is ethics. >> CORRECT^^
That is just my opinion. kk>> CORRECT^^Have a nice day.
>> CORRECT^^
We talk more tomorrow.>> Let\'s talk more tomorrow.ByE ~!
>> CORRECT^^
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