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2014-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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If every were able to communicate telepathically, Many people would not saying. because though we don't saying, we can know that the other person would think. but it only needs person which nearby lives. So we need telephone continuously. When I think when we can good speaking, we can spend a high quality telepathically.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for expressing your idea about this. I corrected your sentences but I\'m not quite sure if I got your ideas correctly! Anyway, Ms. [이름], let me remind you again of your capitalization and punctuation marks. When you are writing, these are very important so please be more careful. I know that you can do better Ms. [이름]! See you! ~T. Jessie~ If every were able to communicate telepathically, Many people would not saying. >> If everyone were able to communicate telepathically, many people would not talk. because though we don\'t saying, we can know that the other person would think. >> Because though we don\'t talk, we can know what the other person is thinking. but it only needs person which nearby lives. >> Do you mean: But we can only communicate with people who live nearby us. So we need telephone continuously. >> So we still need telephone. When I think when we can good speaking, we can spend a high quality telepathically. >> Do you mean: I think, when we are good in speaking, we can have high quality telepathy. 

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