homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Please go over the corrections I made.
I hope I got your ideas correctly.
Let\'s talk more about it tomorrow since I don\'t understand one of the sentences.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
I am preparing my first major assingment-presentation in English class.
>>
I am preparing for my first major assignment-presentation in my English class.
This is one part of the script.
>> Correct!
Could you check this sentences and make more fluently? :)
>> Could you check these sentences and make them more fluently? :)
OR>> Could you check these sentences and could you suggest better ones?
Thank for listening our presentation today.
>> Thank you for listening to our presentation today.
If anyone is here who believes fateful love and has courage to overcome realities for love?
>> Is there anyone here who believes in fateful love and has the courage to fight for it?
OR>> Is there anyone here who believes in destiny and is ready to fight for it?
1) You guys are realists and have cynical views about predestined love.
>> Correct!
2) -- students raise their hand.
>> Students will raise their hands.
I wonder you meet a predestined lover aready.
>> I wonder if you have met your predestined lover aready.
If you don\'t meet yet, I hope that you meet him/her soon.
>> If you haven\'t met him/her yet, I hope that you\'ll meet him/her soon.
Today, two Ji Hyun Kims will present about the <심생전> and <춘향전> which main characters of the stories overcome social status and love fatefully in age of Cho-Sun.
>> Do you mean: Today, we will present about <심생전> and <춘향전>. In these stories, the main characters overcame social status and love during the Cho-Sun dynasty.
(I don\'t quite understand this sentence. Let\'s talk about it tomorrow.)
First, we will narrate the folktales, then compare and analyze the folktales in detail.
>> First, we will narrate the folktales, then we will compare and analyze them in detail.
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