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2014-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I am preparing my first major assingment-presentation in English class. This is one part of the script. Could you check this sentences and make more fluently? :) Thank for listening our presentation today. If anyone is here who believes fateful love and has courage to overcome realities for love? 1) You guys are realists and have cynical views about predestined love. 2) -- students raise their hand. I wonder you meet a predestined lover aready. If you don't meet yet, I hope that you meet him/her soon. Today, two Ji Hyun Kims will present about the <심생전> and <춘향전> which main characters of the stories overcome social status and love fatefully in age of Cho-Sun. First, we will narrate the folktales, then compare and analyze the folktales in detail.

강사 첨삭


Hello there!

Please go over the corrections I made.

I hope I got your ideas correctly.

Let\'s talk more about it tomorrow since I don\'t understand one of the sentences.

See you!

~T. Jessie~

I am preparing my first major assingment-presentation in English class.

>>

I am preparing for my first major assignment-presentation in my English class.

This is one part of the script.

>> Correct!
Could you check this sentences and make more fluently? :)

>> Could you check these sentences and make them more fluently? :)

OR>> Could you check these sentences and could you suggest better ones?
Thank for listening our presentation today.

>> Thank you for listening to our presentation today.
If anyone is here who believes fateful love and has courage to overcome realities for love?

>> Is there anyone here who believes in fateful love and has the courage to fight for it?

OR>> Is there anyone here who believes in destiny and is ready to fight for it?
1) You guys are realists and have cynical views about predestined love.

>> Correct!
2) -- students raise their hand.

>> Students will raise their hands.

I wonder you meet a predestined lover aready.

>> I wonder if you have met your predestined lover aready.

If you don\'t meet yet, I hope that you meet him/her soon.

>> If you haven\'t met him/her yet, I hope that you\'ll meet him/her soon.
Today, two Ji Hyun Kims will present about the <심생전> and <춘향전> which main characters of the stories overcome social status and love fatefully in age of Cho-Sun.

>> Do you mean: Today, we will present about <심생전> and <춘향전>. In these stories, the main characters overcame social status and love during the Cho-Sun dynasty.

(I don\'t quite understand this sentence. Let\'s talk about it tomorrow.)
First, we will narrate the folktales, then compare and analyze the folktales in detail.

>> First, we will narrate the folktales, then we will compare and analyze them in detail.

 

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